Script Critiques On Steroids
I do things quite different. I specialize in providing a screen recording of your script as I work through it. No more long notes to trawl through, no more flicking between a text file and your script to see where someone meant what. Audio notes + red-line edits pinpoint areas of improvement as you watch. Just sit back and watch. It’s that easy.
Feedback in text can be misunderstood. A video is a clearer way of communicating because you get to SEE the specifics and HEAR my tone of voice. And that makes a world of difference.
Ever heard of page architecture? Very few have, and it’s amazing.
Be Kind To Your Reader
Get rid of unnecessary fluff, useless filler… the things that don’t matter. Find the balance between detail and generalizations and more importantly, understand WHY this is important. By utilizing the basic concepts of cinematography, editing, and sound design, I do my best to help people realize their vision.
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The Effortless Read
The Good Read
The Effortless Read is when your reader doesn’t get pulled out of the story for any reason. Writers know their entire world. Readers don’t. It’s our job to be clear and concise with powerful visuals.
The Good Read picks up where The Effortless Read leaves off by adding good story elements. There is a difference between ‘story’ and ‘storytelling.’ Understanding this helps writers write with purpose.
